- the maincaracter is just black, i cant relate to him or his pain/sorrow and that's a miss. His outlines/sillouette isnt that special either.. his hair is really corny.
- you lost me a bit when the shooting and explosions began, the were below the quality of the beginning.
- the end is too fast or something, you are watching and then 'is this the end?'
- the father/son is perfect, dont make it too hasty though(dads voice), the son's time to say something is good for that, nice
- the lighting in the dark with the cleaner was nice, also i laughed when he snaps the neck of the robot.
Some animation was far better then other parts in the movie
its actually not bad.
i liked the humor
nice style jumping from scene to scene
sounds match well.
not so good:
the flash isnt really good, some parts are nice, but other parts are just 2minutes work. a good thing the humor is nice, otherwise it would be crab. it would be a lot better if the flash was better.
O SO BAD:
realy sux ass, dont include him in your flash, unless you do something nobody else has done with it.
Crabs are not crap.
very nice animation, could have some depth in it, depents on how you see it.
on the other hand, the 'easter egg' really sucks, its just the same animation, and really its only fun once..
get rid of it, or make it a real easter egg.
graphics are good, but humor? no...
zzz, it bored the crap out of me, really, the graphics look good, but the humor is boring and that the sound is really bad and you cant hear what they say sometimes doesn't help in any way. if you make the sound better, clearer, it wille be a lot better.
just to many halo jokes around
some were good
some jokes were funny and make me laugh, but some weren't funny at all. you should look at your own jokes and see if they are funny or not, ask someone before you make the whole thing. because this could be great, but now it isn't
yeah i know what u mean.
very nice, especially because its frame by frame!
nicely done, remamber people, no motion tweens or whatever used in this film, only frame by frame!
so dont vote because it looks crappy or something :P
there are far better tutorials then this, why make anotherone that is worse? there's no point. + the head is not vere generic en the mouth looks shitty.
wow, that was boring man!
- graphics... to simple, you only had a few frames.. and they looked pretty bad.
- style, its not much done before, i gess, but i can see wy!
- sound, the only thing funny was what the doctor sad, if you cant understand that...
- humor, it was a bit funny though..
but no, it sucks, series? are you kiddin me? and why do people rate this so high? i don't get it, sorry
PROFESSOR. Not Doctor. And the series thing was a joke. Which you obviously didn't get...
yes, it was sooo boring...
lets see you do better
nice flash, but instead of shouting my head off like an idiot about how good it is in 2 words, ill give you some things to look at.
in the first part, i really liked the flash, nice effects there, but the music was too loud, you should put that down. its the voice you want to hear, because that is telling the/an story. the music comes later on.
its cool if you can do 3d, but it doesn't fit this animation, it just doesn't mix with eachother, not this way. the part that he is running building to building, some parts i just hated that you used that background. it doesn't match.
some guy sad it before, the characters look generic, keep in mind that it is the main character's story you'r telling, so he's allways in vieuw. make sure you make an art of him and the other main characters. that sure would pump it up!
maybe the story doen't seen very new, but its only the beginning, thats the nice thing of it al, you always can do something different:) its your work, people who think they know the story allready... yeah, we'll see when its done:)
well, thats for now, i nice flash, but if you look into a few points it could be better. good luck!
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